Open Poetry #21 |
Beyond Hope |
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
There is a place beyond hope, where all the unfilled dreams lie. Its the place where you hide all the heartbreaks, all the tears, of broken promises, of unrealized ambitions, of lost love. Far enough away. Just out of sight. But near enough to touch. You know, just in case. Right there. Beyond hope. |
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cherrypoptart Member
since 2002-06-09
Posts 109state of wordthiness |
I don't think you'll ever be beyond hope....Too nice a person and a lovely poet.......You'll always have hope right in front of you wishing you would catch up to it. This is a great write Paula......those helpless feelings expressed very well. My dad told me all about you. [This message has been edited by cherrypoptart (07-01-2002 08:26 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula darling heart this is as always superb writing from you. very clever of you to spin your dream net of rainbows you know exactly how to capture thought this is truly awesome. This is spectacular writing. The type of writing that takes you into the very heart of it and holds you captured and spell bound until the last word. Writing such as this is too fine, too rare to be tossed aside carelessly, or read too quickly in haste. Writing such as this must be allowed to sink into the soul of the reader and settle like a mantle over the spirit. You impart wisdom, sharpen the senses and giving the soul such wonder, such thoughts, that they inspire, and stir that place within. Hope always lives darling heart I know you know that, this I take it is you playing the devil’s advocate. As always your writing sings in me. And I hear a response always. This is wonderful writing utterly utterly wonderful I love it utterly utterly. Can you tell I’m pleased to see you? MMMmmmm I am Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love what's in the beyond...right after the hope reigns in.. I enjoyed your words, Paula Nice to read you tonight *s M |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
And a place well known, great write Paula! Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller |
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