Open Poetry #21 |
Shadows Kiss (duet of 1slick_lady and S Arthur Grey) |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Shadows Kiss I am lost in reminisce is this the way shadows kiss moon lit brush of lips divine once in dreams now are mine with you I flow in star filled dance reflection of silk silhouetted chance I can hear an echoing sound like shadows with voices found emerging from dreams at night intensifying in morning light they touch in ways I did not know and seem to me in common flow [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (07-01-2002 06:34 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I enjoyed the flow of this---it poured out seamless as tho just ONE THOUGHT...and yet, was not rushed...like a sweeping slow dance. Like...Ginger Rogers and Fred Astaire. Well done, you two. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Nice work you two!!! Loved it!! Krishankins A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You two du-et very well together. Excellent! Enjoyed thoroughly this evening. ~Hugs to you both~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Serenity took the thought right out of my warped old brain.... This is beautiful. So well done, seems as though from one... |
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