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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee 
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Stem songs wiring high into heaven realms spilling Fair blushing drink of day How, to bind favor unto forever to taste as sinful berries to blend as quenching liquid ripening heavy horizons polishing deep the currants of time Glass this swallow, still grasping flavor keeping secret bouquets sharing honey made rare to taste Gloss this scarlet change long into you Vine dangling ecstasy bare Pour for me, your danger of never same, Dionysus My Dionysus rain wild your plummets of crystalline
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Keith Morgan Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 114Md |
very beautiful usage of words and vision. sweet and seductive poem, that teases the mind. thank you for sharing such wonderful dreams. Write from the soul and the words will flow |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Is Aphrodite an appropriate name?? I swear you could turn dirt into something so delicate and passionate.... You be the one! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
The currants of time! That's awesome! And so's this very wine-infused poem! These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
regina, the winery blushes proudly at your art, lovely sinful babe, enjoyed you here |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Gloss this scarlet change long into you Vine dangling ecstasy bare you just keep getting better m' friend. Have missed your words. Heart hugs somy~ Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well there you are!! I thought I might find you at the "oxygen" bar  but instead you are roaming around the vineyard indulging in the passions of fruit.Such beauty you add to the vines in this remarkable piece. Your phrasing and line breaks in this piece are nothing short of superb. You have done well in both honoring the poet that inspired you and in creating an inspirational one yourself. Well done and very much enjoyed as always. Now YOU see why I call your pen MAGICAL. Make sure you recognize love as the gift it is and not a need that is out of focus |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
How, to bind favor unto forever to taste as sinful berries to blend as quenching liquid ripening heavy horizons polishing deep the currants of time =========================== Gloss this scarlet change long into you Vine dangling ecstasy bare Pour for me, your danger of never same, Dionysus My Dionysus rain wild your plummets of crystalline ============================= My oh my....you worked this metaphor till it was poetic perfection. Very very cool... love the imagery and analogy blending of this Reggie...was like sipping fine wine and how cool is this line: How, to bind favor unto forever how indeed  And all of this is made a sweeter brew when inpsired by another poets words... ya did his "plummets of crystalline" justice. Who knew a glow bug could write so well. LOLWhen your own emptiness is all thats getting through, |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a beautiful poem indeed - I enjoyed it so much - thanks Paul |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
wow....your work, I believe, is what makes m realize, what is missing in my life, your work 'pokes' me out of my safe, but boring retreated to 'zone' |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"Glass this swallow, still grasping flavor keeping secret bouquets sharing honey made rare to taste Gloss this scarlet change long into you Vine dangling ecstasy bare Pour for me, your danger of never same, Dionysus My Dionysus rain wild your plummets of crystalline Oh such visions.......Warming me through and through...........I melted into this write! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hmmmmmmm. . . soft and subtle, with ever-changing undertones. . . a waftfulness that plays with the mind and sends it dreaming. . . fruity, but yet, tasteful. . . a very bold yet caressing red. . . one that coats the palette with many flavors and memories. . . and the aftertaste. . . softer yet, leaving behind a memory. . . hmmm. . . this was a very good year. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ever admiring you--I read you? and cringe when I read my own... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Keith: Thank you for being here to share with. So nice to meet you indeed! Magnus: Mmmm..mud pies and rain. Dirt can be good! You are way too sweet. Great big hugs!! bsquirrel: You..are awesome thank you darling. Dark: You turn up the sun D..inspiring art is your art. Warm hugs.. Donna: Miss you too!! Write! Hugs somy~ Mark: Blush~ I was in hyperventilate heaven.~wink* You are so good to me. I appreciate you very much. KEEP writing please..I need the exercise~ giggle. Janet: LOL! Yeppers..glow bugs can muster up poetic lightening..ROLF..I am sooo glad you think I did justice. Very hard art to follow. And I KNEW you'd recognize the artist. Cause you are sooo in tune..thanks for you!!! Paul: Thanks poet. I appreciate you! jellybeans: Oh poet..you, your poetry is gorgeous..write dear one, write. Original you are..Giant hugs. ethome: I am thrilled you enjoyed it so. Warm hugs and many thanks to you. Sven: You have perfect taste! Hug you poet! serenity: When you write..you are night, day and mystique. I am only blessed you read me. Thank you poetess. Sincerely, Reg |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
You've made becoming a wine connoisseur a new art form.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
rwood, As long as there is no apple among the berries it sounds good to me. Wonderful write |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sinfully beautiful Regina! LOVED IT!! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Just me needing to put this back at the top...where it belongs dear somy~ Hugs.... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, I just love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always take my breath away and sparkle with delightful passion! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well, you know what I am thinking? I am thinking I could become your editor and we could make some serious cash Reggie. Talk to that husband of yours and I say we publish you, and if I can't be your editor, may I then be your first customer? This was simply fanstastic writing, and I wish it were bound into a book I could hold. Nothing means more to me than faith, |
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