Open Poetry #21 |
At Random We Met |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
It was at random we first met Two souls drifting through space As I read your words before me But was unable to see your face We typed like there was no tomorrow Finding more in common as we went Time for us had no meaning So many hours together we spent We would type our messages hastily Eagerly waiting for a reply Such a relationship was uncertain For one could so easily lie But I trusted you with my heart As I revealed my inner soul For so long my heart had been empty But you'd been able to fill that hole I felt like I'd known you forever You promised me love and so much more Was my life finally turning around? Was he the one I'd been searcing for? But one day everything changed I guess some things aren't meant to be You'd moved on to greener pastures For no more did you contact me * * * This was written for all those lonely hearts who search cyberspace looking for a soulmate only to be let down by someone they thought they could trust Suetang |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a poem that shows that the struggles of relationship also are a part of cyberspace - very well written and lots of feeling for those who lose at love there - Thanks - Paul |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good job Sue...because it happens... |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
So true, so true!! I like. Krishankins A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, this is so very sad, sweet friend, it too saddens me to see so many broken-hearted. I feel that when one is young and is a young adult that it is fine though to try and find people on-line because you can experiment and learn to practice socializing! I met my love Joanna on-line and we may meet this summer, YAY!!! (kiss on cheek) You speak of this event so well, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet ue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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