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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Petroglyphs on river sandstone read carved in stone while you're in bed rivers now dammed occlude the art iron age man would wake in a start ancient words were pics of life symbols for display carved under knife near dinosaur footpaths all worn down cultural disappearance makes me frown wonder how those carvings came to be stone messages, near groves of jasmin tea bas reliefs on river sandstone beds carved in stone, waiting to be read. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Some day should you care to read, I will reprint Carve On for you... |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Is this a poem you wrote, sure why not..thanks for sharing |
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cherrypoptart Member
since 2002-06-09
Posts 109state of wordthiness |
This is good. I'd like to read Sunshine's poem too. |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~makes me frown too,...and golly, your last stanza, just really stands out to me. The entire write, terrific. Thank you. *Peace. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
cherrypoptart, your best bet is to remind Karilea you'd like to see her poem Carve on by commenting on one of her writes  Alicia, thanks for reading |
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