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Lost Within
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Lost Within |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York 
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Sunshine blocking eyes covered lost within night falling sky crawling night day Sunshine blocking back bending lost within night trying light crying left into left dying lost within |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Kellie, the style of the poem reflects the angst within, very well done. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
here is the revised version of lost within sunshine blocking ees covered...lost within night walking sweet talking...lost within body bouncing legs pouncing... lost within moonlight dancing feet prancing... lost within back bending money spending... lost within deep sulking angry bulking... lost within |
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