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I'm Forever Their Just Tears
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I'm Forever Their Just Tears |
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texasrose Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 146 |
Tears of sadness falling down I laugh at them as they hit the ground because now there gone and I'm still here I'm forever but their just tears! [This message has been edited by texasrose (06-29-2002 09:40 AM).] |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
texasrose...this is a good way of looking at tears. Well written piece alan |
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texasrose Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 146 |
Thank you. I was reading all the "teary" poems and thought just to make it a bit happier, but how? This is what I came up with. Thanks again. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
M' friend, thank you... yes, just a bit happier. Yeah, ya do know how to make me smile. Hugs...  Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. {on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (06-29-2002 09:56 AM).] |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just wonderful. I like the way you wrote this. I never thought of tears like this. But, it is true. Thank you for posting it. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love this, yay, this is a wonderful way of looking at tears, I am going to try looking at them this way from now on! (smiles) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...James |
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