»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #21
»
If You Only Knew...
| Open Poetry #21 |
|
If You Only Knew... |
|
|
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
|
IF YOU ONLY KNEW.... If you only knew how much I loved you ~ and I did ~ If you only knew how much I longed for you ~ and I do ~ If you only knew how my love is endless for you ~ and it is ~ If you only knew ~ But you went away ~ If you only knew how much I wanted you to stay ~ If you only knew ~.... Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I like how you do these list poems.......Nice touch and a good read! |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes I could have written this about a few that I wanted to stay...fortunately the one I am with now is staying...James |
||
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Roniece, this is wonderful but sad, sweet friend, I know how hard this feeling must be and I hope that love now can truly feel for you as much as you feel also! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Roniece, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
|
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Roniece, I felt the regret in this, superb. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely done in your beautiful, unique way. Enjoyed so very much! ~Hugs~ |
||
|
EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I'm really enjoying reading your work again Roniece!  Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
