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O' Death
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O' Death |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas 
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I feel the icy hands of death Wrapping around my soul I fight them off with fiery will Screaming to be let go He smiles his paralyzing grin His black eyes full of hate He's been a waitin' at my door The keeper at the gate You must have let him in that day You made the choice to leave Like you, he made a big mistake Now pain he shall receive I'll bleed his veins until he's weak Then cauterize his wounds I'll break his bones so he can't walk Then drag him 'round the room Death will beg for my empathy I'll give him less than none See, when it comes to "live or die" It's my life, and I'm not done! A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
*big grins* here sweetie... I love the attitude you sass off in this one!!! oh yes...you tell em... Take care you Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
wow...a longer one from you!!! I like it, especially the first stanza. I could actually feel the hands grabbing me. (hugs) |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
This one made me smile... thanks! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You shouldn't be eating Pepperoni Pizza so late... it'll give you nightmares every time! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krishankins Well done I enjoyed the read. |
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