Beneath This Princess Mask, A Fight

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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2002-06-28 05:08 PM

Not one moment could fade that we had made together.
I have always been love's poet
slave to its bonds that have often caused me hazzard,
but not one drop of time could be forgotten
not one drink of a moment could go unsipped.
There is an us scattered in dream distance
as we, like gold stricken treasure seekers
let the glittering guide us in the dark of difficulties.
I will see you built
destroyed no further
for I was taught to love for the right things.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-06-28 06:10 PM

Temptress,
I think the last line is so perfect.And the rest is silken smooth.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-06-28 11:14 PM

(smiles) Oh Jennifer, this is wonderful, sweet friend, yes, always treasure those things you love so very much and divide them from what doesn't appeal to you! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

3 posted 2002-06-29 12:22 PM

Enjoyed it very much, Jenn

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

4 posted 2002-06-29 01:34 AM

Loved that last line Jen...

good to read you again my sweetie!!!!

Take care you
~D

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2002-06-29 02:57 AM

Waste not, want not~

To love and be loved in all the right ways and for all the right reasons is the giving and taking and what loves all about.

I'm going back for seconds to read this again. Really nice~

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

6 posted 2002-06-29 10:25 AM

It seems as though this is your 'fight' song...an anthem to standing up for your love....is that right?

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2002-06-29 04:55 PM

That last line is the reality of it all....Very very nicely done!

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

8 posted 2002-06-29 07:42 PM

Jenn darling girl this is wonderful writing, the last line sings to my soul and the rest flows over the page with pure wonder. Fabulous writing darling girl utterly utterly fabulous

I love this one from you definitely your anthem, well done and beautifully written

Love and warm stuff
As always
slushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

9 posted 2002-06-29 07:50 PM

Not one moment could fade that we had made together.
I have always been love's poet
slave to its bonds that have often caused me hazzard,
but not one drop of time could be forgotten
not one drink of a moment could go unsipped.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

This is fabulous writing!

Deb

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