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In Literary Start...(to my challenge)
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In Literary Start...(to my challenge) |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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~In Literary Start~ I was nineteen mid Cali-spring Just got out of a four year “thing” With a man so slippery- he forgot the caution sign never thought to tell me my wounds were carpet burns forever grazing tip of rug forever scalding songs of love… Silver tears (frozen before) flowed freely upon wasted years As passion gloried dust My sis showed me this healing site Think it was- Open # 3?? Since then I’ve been a glue stick draining pen and heart reining in upon the words Of fellow poets ~in literary start~ Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
And thus began devina. I have pretty much the same story. You're never a dull read sweets  A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
back to how it all started eh??? love it. . .and love that you're here my friend. . . well done. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
and we've been blessed with verse and heart ever since. Love ya! *mwah* |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
devina, you can always tell when there are good beginnings they build strong roots and you have roots going deep. Fabulous write. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Tanya, I'm so very happy you're here with us all, sweet friend, that is indeed an interesting story! I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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BrandeeM Junior Member
since 2002-05-01
Posts 45 |
Seems alot of us have similar reasong huh? Enjoyed your words here T... |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
i'm glad you are here! I enjoy your poetry so much. (hugs) rose |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I am sure there are many that found their literary start in much the same way. Seems that in order to be an artist in any medium, first you must live part of life's canvas on the backside as much as you would on the front. Well written and much enjoyed. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful!!! It's odd to read that a lot of our members came here hurting and found solace in writing. (This is a great challenge by the way!) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hi devina, fantastic challenge...what a great way to get to know each other..my beginnings are mundane, so i don't know if i should share...but it was nice to read your poem..chuckled at the lines below: With a man so slippery- he forgot the caution sign |
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cherrypoptart Member
since 2002-06-09
Posts 109state of wordthiness |
I really like this! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
My experience was similar, d. (only with a girl, sorry!) And I don't have th' guts to write that as a poem...Loved yrs, though! These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Kris- I think everyone has had this same story a time or two...I could go on for days!! John- just as glad as I am sweets...been a long ride eh?? Kethry- ain't that the truth!!! ty MA- the details usually are!! ty Brandee-Indeed!! Mark- oh you are SO right...if my life was perfect I'm sure I'd have nuftin to write about!!! love your insight!!! Sharon- I was purdy sure it was the case...but you know nosy me!! ROFL faterider- Ya know- I think they should ALL have to post it somewheres...forehead perhaps??? *big grins* glad to make you chuckle!!! cherrypoptart- thank you!!! Mike- you know I've had my experiences with woman too silly...that's why I'm convinced they are all EVIL...  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
D, so true ... but they look sooo much better!*imagines Lori in the rain*......... ....*ka-thump!* These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
wonderful poetry and a wonderful look in on your start - loved it - Paul |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is a challenge poem? If so... you really think one of us is going to do better than this? Hmmmmmm... I am notsa sure bouta dat! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
I was brought to passions by Larry C. He brouhgt me here with his daughter. She was my teacher and forever my guide. I am so glad this was shown to me. Thank You Larry Thank You MS.C Godbless All I love Thee |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Rob How could I have missed you sweets...sooooo sorry....lemme kiss it better *mwah*.... Mike- definantly luv struk my friend...blessed be! Paul- tappin my foot over here hun..let's hear yours!! Barry- you stand in the line of us all sweet man...you can do this!!! vandana-thank you!! Kelly- well remind me to thank him as well!!! Welcome to the forums!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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