Open Poetry #21 |
I Forgot How It Felt |
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Coming through the window As I sit here thinking About the love you showed It has been so long now Since I felt your embrace When you made my heart beat As if it was in a race I question love once felt To find if it was real No longer am I aware Of how I really feel It has been so long since I felt your gentle touch I forgot how it felt You loving me so much So many memories Of how it use to be Not knowing what went wrong Or if you still love me Love has no conditions It seems as if yours does My love for you is true And it is just because By Sue 6-28-02 |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is very excellent, Sue...pardon the grammatical mistake....very excellent are 2 superlatives, but its the only way I can describe your poem.... Very excellent, indeed! ~ great writing hugs Lyra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, this is soooooo beautiful but feels sad too, sweet friend, I hope this is only a fictional thought and now your heart is filled with true loves joy! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we al love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Beautiful poem...where does love go? Hope it finds you, again! Forgetting all I'm lacking |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful poem Sue! Enjoyed so much! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Love is a hard one to explain but a true love will find a way to endure. Very nice write and I hope he realizes the gift he has in his grasp. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuzieQ~ So poignantly you pen your emotions~ This is softly and gently done~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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