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rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

0 posted 2002-06-28 08:06 AM

Faint echoes winding
in my song player recesses
Not just a catchy tune
a real one

I can tell the difference

Because it searches me out
Makes we wonder
how the notes fit so perfectly
together
to make this stream blanket
blend

They cling to me all day
making me sing them
even when I feel like hiding
quietly away

I tap the moment unfocused
upon flat surface thoughts
and hum a smile
fandango

As I can’t help, but wonder
if the dishonest, belligerent
and highly unattractive soul
in front of me
screaming
scowling
and spitting
ever hears
the song inside their head

"They say that a hero can save us. I’m not
gonna stand here and wait. I’ll hold on to the wings of the
eagles and watch as we all fly away."~Chad Kroeger~&~Josey Scott~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-06-28 08:28 AM

Regina,
fabulous construction and the images were fantastic.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2002-06-28 08:50 AM

I tap the moment unfocused
upon flat surface thoughts
and hum a smile~~~~

YOU are a smile m' friend. Hugs somy~

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-06-28 09:00 AM

Wonderful Regina....
Love it when a great tune sticks in my head..
~Hugs~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-06-28 09:32 AM

Regina,
A good thought, a good write, a good poem. Enjoyed

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2002-06-28 09:35 AM

liked it

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2002-06-28 04:37 PM

they do Reg. . . that's why we have to sing them our songs. . .

wonderful my friend. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

7 posted 2002-06-28 06:45 PM

As I can’t help, but wonder
if the dishonest, belligerent
and highly unattractive soul
in front of me
screaming
scowling
and spitting
ever hears
the song inside their head

Thats a very good question, Reg...and I have often wondered the same thing.
Isn't it amazing how sometimes we hear a song on the radio in the morning and it just stays with us all day long...

I love the poem.

~ musical hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

8 posted 2002-06-28 06:48 PM

And this is the way good poems get written. Loved it. Joyce

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

9 posted 2002-06-28 07:17 PM

Hello Regina

Marvellous images once again presented from your wonderful words.

Take care....Sue

Suetang

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-06-28 08:06 PM

(smiles) Oh Regina, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I know this feeling so so much, and not only do I get songs in my head all the time but somehow I go through many phases and get various ones in my head played, just like a radio channel! LOL! This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

11 posted 2002-06-29 03:07 AM

Yeppers, this is why I am a big fan of yours!
I for one believe that the song inside your head is one worth learning the words to. Excellent writing and superb use of metaphors to capture the elegance of the write. Well done and I truely enjoyed much.

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