Open Poetry #21 |
War of Pride |
Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
You've stormed the walls in victory And burned my kingdom down You've slain the knights which guard my heart But you'll never take my crown! A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I will give, rather than let anyone take what's mine, when and if it comes to pass. Nice one Kris~ |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
As with your replies, your poetry is truly wounderful, I like this clever little rhyme a lot, especially ... 'You've slain the knights which guard my heart But you'll never take my crown!' Funny yet meaningful at the same time - my favourite . Thanks a lot . L.of.L. Tom . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love this presentation.............So many different ways the reader can go with this and I think that's wonderful! |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
You're a clear victor, of dignity too! Wonderful write. mycafe |
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