Open Poetry #21 |
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This Love is Hate |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
Hopeless & Restless Rapidly diminishing all accomplished peace Tragedy Within Unresolved conflicts of life Deception sets in when the mood is weak This Love is Hate That we cover with the sheets In hopes of returning The favor she brings My Debt is Paid With shivers & chills Of a Love that hates chasing you Languishing & Rejoicing A Love that was & never would be... For in much wisdom is much grief |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Wow...powerfully stated and presented. I can surely relate to this so very well...~sigh~ Well done! |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
I agree with Dulcinea so much on this one : really powerful poetry - I love the way you've brought out the first line to make the point; An absolutly brilliant piece . I enjoyed reading it . L.of.L. Tom . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nicely done.... "Deception sets in when the mood is weak" So true. The rest is right on too! |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
Dulcinea ~ Your words of kindness move me; Thank You Angelswing ~ You humble me with "Brilliant" Thank You Ethome ~ You always bring a smile to my heart! Thank You With Admiration ~Rayne For in much wisdom is much grief |
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