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Twenty or less.....you call the title
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Twenty or less.....you call the title |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Fresh corn waiting to be shucked, feel the breeze. Golden hair flowing as fingers touch each row of me. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy I would call it Corn Fed but that’s because I have a vision of someone eating sweet-corn. This is wonderful writing you never fail darling boy and these 20 or less you excel at. I love it utterly utterly, and since you’ve had a hard day I won’t let the wench set you alight tonight. The duel can wait darling boy until tomorrow. And then ……… the gloves are off   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) This may sound like a silly title but I thought of "Hand-Chucked Love", I just thought it sounded clever with its internal rhyme! LOL! (big hugggssssss) This is a wonderful and delightful poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'm torn between "Aw, shucks" and "Corny" |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
In all truth...popcorn! How about The Husk? Well done. ThisDiamond |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Even if we don't always reap what we sow, I would call it a 'Harvest' This was awful sweet Magnus! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh yes....you go to the head of the class with this one. Such clever reverse images......great work! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good eating. Yep, that's what I'd call this poem... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry Wonderful!...a "Harvest" in my mind. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"field of desire. . . " if you write it. . . they will read. . .  great work Sir. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
how about..."the taste of silk" ???? |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Um..Barry??? Could we call it..."shuck me"??? *EG I like it!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Well butter me up and call me corny. Mmmm, mmmm sweet! Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Now That's What I Call The Cream Of The Crop!" (smiles) I just had to share this idea for a title, it is long yet it stuck to my head! LOL! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ha I have no idea of my own for a title. But I liked the related images here, really clever. I think I pick Noah's last title. Sandra |
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