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Hope of a Rose (Duet w/ Krishankins)
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Hope of a Rose (Duet w/ Krishankins) |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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*Kris's parts are bold, mine aren't I dream of love with you in mind In my thoughts it will remain I've formed my mouth to say the words But I can't even ask your name I've noticed you around Slyly giving me the eye I think I might've found A sweet but shy guy I swim against the current's flow As second thoughts transpire Afraid if I give in again I'll drown in love's desire Drowning? Not in this lifetime You'll float with the clouds And I'll be your lifeline If you speak my name out loud No longer can I deny you My heart just can't resist It's you, my lovely RosePetal Whom I want forever with Put your hand in mine While I lead you to the stars I promise it'll be one a kind This newfound love of ours [This message has been edited by RosePetal (06-27-2002 05:47 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RosePetal A good collaboration and a good write. |
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shadow74 Junior Member
since 2002-06-26
Posts 12MI, Water world |
Nice. I like that. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This was amazing you two!!! I do believe that *spring time love* has come...and you both do it justice!!! Very well done!!! Take care all ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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ambermize Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 157California |
Oh my goodness......this was amazing.. havent seen this done before..refreshing! I may to have to work on a collaboration..so to speak....whadya say tanny? I love this one guys...... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Oh my gosh, you both make such a beautiful team! (smiles) I am so happy that you both shared your wonderful talents here and come up with a classic romance poem! (BIG GROUP HUG) My love, I can't wait to write another duet with you! (smiles) We all love you both so much, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher and Joanna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 FANTASTIC!! You two du-et so well together! I hope to see yet another from the two of you. What a team!! *Joanna, I wanted to thank you for the song dedication...you are a sweetheart!* |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I have to admit, without your shores to wash upon, my words would simply drift asea, unwritten, and unread. It was a pleasure composing this with you J. Hugs, Kris A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Thanks everyone We are so pleased that you liked it.Kris, it was fun....whenever u want to write again let me know. |
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