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Funny Mirrors |
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mable_sue Junior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 25Iowa |
Funny Mirrors Journey filled alliances with unmasked continuity flutter by like translucent butterflies blindly ensuing makers of the repulsive dollar and coin. The importance of the insects’ unimportance drives us through rush hour pondering the suited man picking his nose or the obese teenager belting her memorization at the windshield wipers. Alliances are decorated with colors as a trip to buy 1% milk is entertained by a 5 year old boy lurking amongst the dairy section, and his Mexican mother bellowing in spanish “No, you cannot have the yogurt!” Tomorrow, the bathroom mirror with specks of hard water and Crest should revert to a funny house mirror distorted like the carnivals they live in, so we might find ourselves to be translucent butterflies with noted alliance to the bright color of the Mexican woman. Would rush hour be different if dollars and coins could buy only funny house mirrors? Then, would dollar and coin and the obese teenager seem less repulsive? Be colorful. Buy a funny mirror. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
mable_sue, Very neatly done. I like your perception of the world. Kethry. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
very creative write! i dig it! nice!!  welcome to the blue pages. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, I just love your clever views of the world, this is wonderful and filled with excellent honesty! (sigh) i tlooks like we can all use one, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Funny Mirrors indeed...I like that title and I like the pictures you painted in this! A very enjoyable read! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent...very well done and enjoyed much by this reader! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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