Open Poetry #21 |
The Icicle Air |
Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Well, I'm rather mopey today. Might steal th' title from Mikhail, my ultimately mopey boytoy. But then again, Mr. Mope just wouldn't work for me. Maybe Mrs. Mope (aw, the happy couple...). Bad day at work. A friggin' usurper is being trained in my spot on bake; the only part of said job that I can stand. *pout, whimper, mope, complain* To prove that I am, in fact, mopey, let's have a go at one of my mopiest poems.
"Sooner or later, they'll never grow up." -Jim Steinman (unreleased and almost completely unheard, but hey) [This message has been edited by Anvrill (06-27-2002 10:39 AM).] |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is the loneliest, saddest, sere-est poem! I never thought of trees that way. This is a completely wonderful, affecting poem. I think you should probably be mopey more often, if it makes you write like this. (Sorry) Nan |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like it..eerie though it is! And it didn't seem too 'mopey' to me.... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Anvrill, this sounds so very haunting and sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you, I am sorry to hear about work and I hope soon the schedule begins to ease down a bit! (sigh) Keep your chin up, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anvrill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
A beautiful haunting. These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Thanks, all. And I think those are the fewest words I've ever seen y' use, Mikhail. "Sooner or later, they'll never grow up." -Jim Steinman (unreleased and almost completely unheard, but hey) |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I only use how many words ah need t', Mrs. Mope. These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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shadow74 Junior Member
since 2002-06-26
Posts 12MI, Water world |
Great poem. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I see this as an "opaque wash"-- the white of ice highlighting what WOULD be dreary...if ice and white did not capture so much color, that is. You two are a great team. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I'm glad you posted this in Open, Anvrill because I always forget to go to the other forums and I would have hated to miss this beauty. ~ haunting hugs Lyra |
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