Open Poetry #21 |
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The Icicle Air |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now ![]() |
Well, I'm rather mopey today. Might steal th' title from Mikhail, my ultimately mopey boytoy. But then again, Mr. Mope just wouldn't work for me. ![]() To prove that I am, in fact, mopey, let's have a go at one of my mopiest poems.
"Sooner or later, they'll never grow up." -Jim Steinman (unreleased and almost completely unheard, but hey) [This message has been edited by Anvrill (06-27-2002 10:39 AM).] |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is the loneliest, saddest, sere-est poem! I never thought of trees that way. This is a completely wonderful, affecting poem. I think you should probably be mopey more often, if it makes you write like this. (Sorry) Nan |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like it..eerie though it is! And it didn't seem too 'mopey' to me.... |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Oh Anvrill, this sounds so very haunting and sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you, I am sorry to hear about work and I hope soon the schedule begins to ease down a bit! (sigh) Keep your chin up, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anvrill, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
A beautiful haunting. These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Thanks, all. And I think those are the fewest words I've ever seen y' use, Mikhail. ![]() "Sooner or later, they'll never grow up." -Jim Steinman (unreleased and almost completely unheard, but hey) |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I only use how many words ah need t', Mrs. Mope. ![]() These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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shadow74 Junior Member
since 2002-06-26
Posts 12MI, Water world |
Great poem. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I see this as an "opaque wash"-- the white of ice highlighting what WOULD be dreary...if ice and white did not capture so much color, that is. ![]() You two are a great team. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I'm glad you posted this in Open, Anvrill because I always forget to go to the other forums and I would have hated to miss this beauty. ![]() Lyra |
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