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trivial thoughts |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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the cranium slumbers into repose as trivial thoughts pass by like flashy convertibles on a motorway trivial thoughts like pretty girls always travel in the passenger seats of these flashy convertibles fast cars and highway love Love today, break up tomorrow got to go my way a false I will remember you promise later the eyes search for the next flashy wagon around the corner a bright smile, a glint of huge happiness and a few sweet words later love is found again it is a total eclipse today and the eyes are closed tight, so tight that darkness can’t escape it must be pathetic to feel like a cigarette born to be smoked with a lifetime of slow burning as the smoker inhales deep breaths of you in a nicotine-tinged intoxication and then exhales yes, sometimes I am one of the “glass is half empty” people travelling downwards and searching the bottom of the chasm and then to think that the smoker continues his chain to him, one cigarette is just as good as another but then I am not going to buy a fast car not yet, anyway I have yet to sell my soul! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, One of your best, enjoyed. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
When I saw the title and then saw your name next to it, I KNEW THAT NO WAY WERE THE THOUGHTS TRIVIAL!!!!!! Excellent writing my friend. It has been way too long since I have been able to indulge in your works and this one is a good example of why I always search out your name. BTW ... I didn't get to reply to it yet but I did very much enjoy the "64" as well. Keep on teaching sir and I will keep on reading and learning. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well done my friend. . . I liked the way you took us from one to the other. . . almost like a trip through your thoughts. . . one of your best. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sudhir, this is superb! I have to agree.. one of your best. Excellent writing m'friend. have missed reading you Maree  hugs |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Well look who's back  So glad to see you again, giving us joy in reading this beautiful poem. But then...when do you not... HUGS, Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Sudhir...this has got to be your best ever! Excellent my friend! ~Canadian hugs to you~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sudhir, this is wonderful, sweet friend, may you live all your wildest dream with ease, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all so very much, my dear friends... I have missed being here... and always long to stay here longer, if for nothing but to linger in these blue pages... Regards to all, Sudhir |
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