Open Poetry #21 |
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The Taste of Toes |
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mable_sue Junior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 25Iowa |
The Taste of Toes Perfection is lost in me. My astrological sign says I posses it. Certain times, Foot in mouth times I just lose it. Sometimes, I think it’s in my red, painted toes. Lingering. for the opportunity for my profound insertion of Those toes to slide between my lips, Showing me the extent of imperfections That have found their way out Of my journeyed lips. I’m lucky these lips Don’t pretend to be Thin Like a gossip’s. I could never keep foolishness in Or stop from biting my foot. Feet don’t taste good, And I can’t tell If perfection Or imperfection Tastes worse. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Hey! I take offense to this poem!!!...Okay, not really, but it was such a tempting subject......Love...Toe |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
isn't it hard enough biting your fingers..hehe, challenging slant you have here...some suggestions? 'posses' should be possess and maybe the foot at the end should be feet like in biting your feet, think that sounds better..after all we bite our fingernails/nails not fingernail/nail. welcome to the party and enjoy the variety you have here..stay tuned to some more of my quizzes ![]() |
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mable_sue Junior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 25Iowa |
ecrivan, I do agree about the feet thing...thanks mucha! |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (big huggsssssss) Oh Elizabeth, I believe no one is perfect and so trying to strive for perfection I feel is worse than knowing imperfection! (sigh) This is very well-expressed, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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