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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas 
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Thunder shakes the floors in heaven As changes break the calm I jumped to touch a tingling cloud But crashed into the sun your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Yes yes yes..LOVE THIS! CAN RELATE!! Very nice way with words.. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
 Me too.Nan |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like this..but what's thunder? LOL We seldom hear it here... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles in delight) Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, I just love the powerful imagery and metaphors you use, may love always incubate your heart with loving care and may you always soak up the sun with joy! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
As a fan of brevity, I enjoyed this a lot. 'Crash and burn'...not this time. Forgetting all I'm lacking |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kris!! I love this!! ~Hugs YOU!~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like this,and it just stopped thundering a lot here. Good metaphor. Sandra |
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