Open Poetry #21 |
if you think |
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I will never fade neither will my voice for love I have crossed more troubles than this. Far too many moments invested to lay down my weapons here and walk away unwound. I do not ache with lonliness I walk with welcome on a red carpet that will never trick my feet into an empty fall. No one has ever been able to silence my words. ~~~no one~~~ How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You just tell it like it is Jen... now you KNOW I like it....with my mouth and all??? I've missed you girlie!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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dwarfdroppings New Member
since 2002-06-26
Posts 6UK |
Far too many moments invested to lay down my weapons here..........Some great lines here. I liked it a lot. Rgds Dwarfy Only my opinion, if you require a gaurantee............buy a toaster! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I walk with welcome on a red carpet that will never trick my feet into an empty fall. No one has ever been able to silence my words. ~~~no one~~~ Jen I have seen so much growth, so much strength in your words.....well done gal. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Jen darling girl, we missed you around here, this is wonderful writing absolutely wonderful writing I wub you too Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
That's right, sister - you just keep on writing those words down! Cor |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
when it comes right down to it. . . words are all that we have, and all that we are. . . take those away. . . and there's nothing left. . . well done. . .powerful. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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