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I wonder...can love be forgotten
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I wonder...can love be forgotten |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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I Wonder ~*~ I wonder if the touch of a hand can be forgotten when it sends tingles up your spine I wonder if a kiss can be forgotten if it burns the inner self that was not known to exsist I wonder if a certain twinkle in sparkling eyes can ever be forgotten when with one look there's no will to resist I wonder if the love of my life knows I could never forget ~*~ BloomingRose |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
The mind may close the door on those memories, but the heart will never forget. Beautiful...Simply Beautiful Krishankins your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Oh Debra, I believe while not all aspects of love could be accepted, the heart will always have a place for all the simple pleasures that are shared! (kiss on cheek) This is delightful, sweet friend, you always write such beautifully heartfelt poems, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
BloomingRose, your poem tugs the heart and I compliment you on this touching write... Hugs2uSweetie *~coco~* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...I think love could be forgotten but who would want to...not me...James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
if it burns the inner self that was not known to exsist I wonder if a certain twinkle in sparkling eyes can ever be forgotten when with one look there's no will to resist ==================================== some things never leave us... some things never should  This is a lovely poetic ponderance of heart. So good to read your delicate work again...welcome back. (Thanks for the read lastnight) jm |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I am not sure if I would want it to be forgotten or not, but I sure do know that there are times that I wish it could. Very nice write and even nicer to see you posting. Now, let's not let too many days elapse before we see you in here again. |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
There is a very real emotion in this poem... all I know is that nothing so beautiful can EVER be lost. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
no. . . even when, sometimes, we'd like it to be. . . heartfelt. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Krish~ It's true, memories are forever. Noah~ Straight from the heart... I thank you always. Coco~ Thank you sweet friend James~ the heart holds on... so true, never to be forgotten jm~ Thank you so much. And thanks for the welcome Mark~ Like it's been said, better to have loved and know the experiance, than to never have loved at all. I will try to stay in the blue pages more often. Thanks so much. Goid~ Thank you for your nice reply. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Bloomingrose, this is a lovely write. The heart will go on for a memory that's worth keeping. I am sure you know the answer. *hugs* marie@mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sigh, I wonder this too. I cannot forget either, but he seem to have. Beautifully done. Sandra |
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