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Untouchable
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Untouchable |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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This will actually be posted and I will sing this at our family reunion in Aug. Untouchable It doesn't seem like that long ago When we met here So many faces and how we've changed Through the years But, through it all we've kept us As close as we could be There's not a thing I'd change Standing here with family... Though some have left us along the way One by one To carry on what they left behind Til' our time has come But, as I look at you there's just so much I want to say We all know that we've been blessed In the most untouchable way... We cried, we laughed Held on when life didn't give back We sang, we danced Lived like there's no second chance But, here tonight, life just became full Cause, you and I are, and this moment is Untouchable... And, though this night may become A memory We can have it all again If we close our eyes to see So, when we leave and say goodbye This you have to do You must remember, always remember Until I meet up with you We'll cry, we'll laugh Hold on when life doesn't give back Still sing, still dance Live like there's no second chance But, here tonight, life just became full Cause, you and I are, and this moment is, Untouchable Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Saunni As an old songwriter I have to say this is beautiful.....Jam packed with emotional pleasure as a result of ties that bind! I hope to be able to hear you sing it. The title is excellent as it explains so much throughout! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
ethome, thank you very much for reading and responding. I like to sing, and of course, I like to write. But, out of anything I've ever done in the presence of others, this song will mean the most.  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
A wise man once said -'You can chose your friends, but you can't chose your family' ... Glad to hear that you will be reunited; Family can be your strongest ally or your worst enemies . I think your family will love it, I did  .L.of.L. Tom . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
your writing is wonderful as usual, Saunni. It shouldn't be this far down the page either.  How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful my friend. . . I've always loved your songwriting ability. . . and this is why. . . beautiful. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
angels, thank you for all the kind words and for reading this as well. I think the family will like it, so I hope lol. But, I honestly wonder how you can't like something that's from the heart. Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
temptress, thank you for reading this. Don't know why it's so far down the page either lol. Thank you, though. Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
John, thank you... you know I love to write, and sing... I am glad you liked this song. Means a lot. Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Saunni, I love this, sweet friend, I think you are a wonderful songwriter as I'd love to hear you sing someday! (sigh) I love to write songs all the time too, it is such a privilege to be free to write freely with heart and a smile, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Noah, thank you, Dear One, you always have a kind response to what I write. I'm sure you are a great song writer... I can just tell. Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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