Open Poetry #21 |
Seeketh Me in Thy Soul |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Seeketh Me in Thy Soul Dark light of shadows, render not thy shade this day not in day, not by cloud nor shade of tree nor shade of thee but rather, Sire, seek me, seek me in thy soul… O sweet dark, sweeter thee than shall admit, do submit in this day, move the cloud, see the sun, see in thee sweet, sweet light, to vary shadows, but cast in bright for in Cimmerian dusk, even thy voice is faintly gone but by light of Ra and ray, the chorus is clear and strong so would thee not want to seek thy song in this light…. for in thy soul I would reside, in thy breath of word for to seek light by darkest of thy night, a candle bright is heard by word of joy “See! The light!” should thee seek me in thy soul… that this shimmer of life, true light, sunder shadows of the night 01.16.01 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"for in thy soul I would reside, in thy breath of word for to seek light by darkest of thy night, a candle bright is heard by word of joy “See! The light!” should thee seek me in thy soul… that this shimmer of life, true light, sunder shadows of the night" (smiles) Oh Karilea, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I especially love the Cimmerian dusk part, I am fascinated also by the stories of Ra and creation and here you unearth a mystical ancient glory that continues to dazzle so many today! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, let there be light always, we all love youso much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Breathtakingly beautiful... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
When I spoke this piece, it took me to the sun. ThisDiamond |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OHHHHHH yEsYeS..... M'lady Wilt the light of moon grace mine eyes or shalt the sleep of night come before? Wilt the gleam of sun rest 'pon my face as my head lies resting upon thy heart? You can get me going with this style... but of course, you already have that all figured out, don't thee? |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
How very lovely this is! Cor |
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