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0 posted 2002-06-26 09:44 PM








Seeketh Me in Thy Soul

Dark light of shadows, render not thy shade this day
not in day, not by cloud nor shade of tree nor shade of thee
but rather, Sire, seek me, seek me in thy soul…

O sweet dark, sweeter thee than shall admit, do submit
in this day, move the cloud, see the sun, see in thee
sweet, sweet light, to vary shadows, but cast in bright

for in Cimmerian dusk, even thy voice is faintly gone
but by light of Ra and ray, the chorus is clear and strong
so would thee not want to seek thy song in this light….

for in thy soul I would reside, in thy breath of word
for to seek light by darkest of thy night, a candle bright is heard
by word of joy “See! The light!” should thee seek me in thy soul…

that this shimmer of life, true light, sunder shadows of the night


01.16.01



© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-26 09:49 PM


"for in thy soul I would reside, in thy breath of word
for to seek light by darkest of thy night, a candle bright is heard
by word of joy “See! The light!” should thee seek me in thy soul…

that this shimmer of life, true light, sunder shadows of the night"




(smiles) Oh Karilea, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I especially love the Cimmerian dusk part, I am fascinated also by the stories of Ra and creation and here you unearth a mystical ancient glory that continues to dazzle so many today! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, let there be light always, we all love youso much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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2 posted 2002-06-26 09:51 PM


...Breathtakingly beautiful...

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3 posted 2002-06-26 09:52 PM


When I spoke this piece, it took me to the sun. ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2002-06-26 09:54 PM


OHHHHHH yEsYeS.....

M'lady
Wilt the light of moon grace mine eyes
or shalt the sleep of night come before?

Wilt the gleam of sun rest 'pon my face
as my head lies resting upon thy heart?

You can get me going with this style...
but of course, you already have that all
figured out, don't thee?

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5 posted 2002-06-26 09:55 PM


How very lovely this is!

Cor

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