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ERICO99
New Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 3
Manteca,Ca. San Jouaquin

0 posted 1999-11-13 06:32 AM


Mysterious
Beclouded behind a black dress
Black flowing hair...brazen down
Beware of this mastress age and spirit renown

Obvious...insolence
Heavily endowed
And you wondered when...
You were taken in
By this wand-waving woman
Bellbook and sound

You wanted her
Ooh, to touch her
Thought you might swim in the passion
That raged on in her soul
Yes it raged with a suffering flow
And so slow...befooled you followed
Under a haunting spell untold
Out of control...impossible to handle
Deviated to go with a wand-waving mastress
Bellbook and candle

Obvious...insolence
And a cast of a silent madstone
The enchantress had you with dangerous intentions...then, still unknown
And there was nothing...noone could do
As this wand-waving witch allured you
As she seemingly haunted you down
You were captured with those spells of hers
...bellbook and sound

Intence...insolence
Beware if a mastress comes mysterious
Beclouded behind her black dress
Intense
Enchantress...heavily endowed
Watch out she's a wand-waving woman
And she'll have you...
Have you bellbook and sound
She'll have you bellbook and sound

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Iloveit
Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121
NM
1 posted 1999-11-15 12:06 PM


like this, think it should be in open poetry,
instead of here, but it paints a vivid picture

JesiKa raBBit
Junior Member
since 1999-11-11
Posts 11
midland Texas USA
2 posted 1999-11-16 04:49 PM


yeah I like this one too. It does paint a nice clear picture and it flows together real nice like.
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