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peaceseaker
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0 posted 2009-07-29 07:03 PM



"I AM"

I am joyful and loving
I wonder about the moon and stars
I hear meories rattling in my mind
I see color filled dreams
I want that peace in the valley
I am joyful and loving

I pretend it isn't so
I feel sadness for the red winged whipers
I touch a trembling heart
I worry that heaven is not for me
I cry the sight of a Grandmother's love
I am joyful and loving

I understand the meaning of love
I say love is something we do
I dream of myself and others
I try to forvive
I hope friendship always
I am joyful and loving

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peaceseaker
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1 posted 2009-07-29 07:10 PM


Sorry about this guy's cannot figure out how to undo....Yikes!
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2 posted 2009-07-29 07:55 PM




look just above your poem, and click on this, it will let you edit it.

If it's been longer than I think 24 hours you will need to email a moderator for that forum and ask them to do it for you.

I hope that helps and? welcome to pip!

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