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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan 
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As a sort of introduction I challenge any takers to decribe their personality in whatever form they chose. ~Jill JNS |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Wow this is a challenge.. I'll have to get back to you on this... cause its gunna take me a while to write out my personallity lol
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The Great Onion Junior Member
since 2008-06-05
Posts 40 |
I made this poem in less than 10 minutes without much thinking. its funny how random things pop out of your head lol. shy the color of the sky is shy when i look up it's shy however i dont know why that a person like me is shy i am never shy when someone stares me into the eye i am never shy when people want me to fly i am never shy when someone tells me to throw a cherry pie i am never shy when the class play goes awry i am never shy when someone tells me to punch a guy (which I never do). however when the 8th grade culmination comes, i know when i am shy and please don't ask me why. |
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The Great Onion Junior Member
since 2008-06-05
Posts 40 |
sorry for taking up space. but there was a couple of spacing problems, this is the final format. shy the color of the sky is shy when i look up it's shy however i dont know why that a person like me is shy i am never shy when someone stares me into the eye i am never shy when people want me to fly i am never shy when someone tells me to throw a cherry pie i am never shy when the class play goes awry i am never shy when someone tells me to punch a guy (which I never do). however when the 8th grade culmination comes, i know when i am shy and please don't ask me why. |
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The Great Onion Junior Member
since 2008-06-05
Posts 40 |
OMG!!! i am very sorry, accidentally posted it twice. anyways, this one is centered; it kinda gives it more feeling. shy the color of the sky is shy when i look up it's shy however i dont know why that a person like me is shy i am never shy when someone stares me into the eye i am never shy when people want me to fly i am never shy when someone tells me to throw a cherry pie i am never shy when the class play goes awry i am never shy when someone tells me to punch a guy (which I never do). however when the 8th grade culmination comes, i know when i am shy and please don't ask me why. |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
That's no problem Great Onion, but for forture reference you can always edit your post as long as it is within the same day. The repetition of "I am never shy" works well for your poem. ~Jill [This message has been edited by The Shadow in Blue (06-09-2008 12:32 PM).] |
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Bob K Member Elite
since 2007-11-03
Posts 4208 |
Dear Falling Rain, Whatever else you come up with, it will be hard put to beat, for the sheer joy of discovering it, the line that you already posted. What a one line personality description! There are fiction writers who would give an arm to have written that, and your unconscious simply coughed it up on the spot. Your unconscious is very fast and very funny and very sharp, and it works very well with your shyness and uncertainty. Keep writing, guy. Yours, BobK |
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The Great Onion Junior Member
since 2008-06-05
Posts 40 |
im glad you liked my poem. not to change the topic of this thread or anything, but has anyone here recieved a high merit in a poetry contest before? i had a high merit attending the Fall Great Lakes competition and guess what; my name and my poem were published in a book! (though it was quite a while ago, i think it was a year before, and i will try to make it to the top poem list of Montana, Wisconsin and Michigan.) though ironically, i live in California :/ |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Oh why thank you BobK.. I wasn't uncertaint where to start LOL.. theres to many words to discribe one personality.. And I don't even know all of them.. but thanks for the complement! Oh and Shadow and Blue.. I'm still writing out this poem!! lol .. this is gunna take awhile.. lol
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Personality (7/15/08) She’s the stranger that you look for In the crowd you never knew The socialite that brings you A hard catch 22 She’s the luckiest unlucky Child you’ll ever meet This talkative inventor That formulates the beat She’s bubbly and funny A bit insane at times But more than just that She’s a creator of rhymes "Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?" |
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