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hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
0 posted 2008-02-08 06:02 PM

you don't say sorry
you don't say bye
all you say
is i wish you would die

this pain i take in
i can't denie
makes me bleed inside

a blood of immortality
and shame
only time can heal this pain

but as i wait
i am parishing out of this place
and i fall on my face

I'm a disgrace
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hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
1 posted 2008-02-08 06:16 PM

ops shout... its in the wrong place... as you can see i am new here
hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
2 posted 2008-02-08 06:16 PM

ops shout... its in the wrong place... as you can see i am new here
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