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Drauntz
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0 posted 2007-06-14 05:00 PM


Dreamy floating steam
before you wrap me with kiss
Pray defrost your hiss


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Drauntz
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1 posted 2007-06-15 07:07 PM


Summer heat
Fresh cake from oven
Burning taste

Drauntz
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2 posted 2007-06-16 08:35 PM


Berry Picking
in  Underwood Family Farm


Under the hot California sun,
In the shadow of walnut trees
I made my lunch a dream

Those little souls
Who never heard songs
From young peaches
Giggled with them
By the strawberry lawn

I cry to the heat
to all the smiling faces
Of my food in green leaves
When I done my sleep.

Drauntz
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3 posted 2007-06-17 06:14 PM




Little girl cries big waves
at her dripping ginger Ice Cream
Mother turns over
to tan other side of her dream
the dog
with such a long tongue
quenches with a lake's beam

and the old willow tree naps
in cicada's scream

[This message has been edited by Drauntz (06-18-2007 12:58 PM).]

Drauntz
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4 posted 2007-06-18 01:20 PM


Summer Heat

Don’t run too fast, dear,
Look at all the sweat
Go take a shower
In the memory of last winter
Then, you looked so cool.


Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-06-19 03:13 PM


You climbed in so quietly
And kissing me to my faint
You wrapped me in so tightly
And you left without a print

Where can I find  you, my love
A such  selfless being?
If only you come in now
To take me out of the pot.
Oh,  jet stream of the pole.  

Drauntz
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6 posted 2007-06-20 03:33 PM


Burning Desire

Ah, Burning Desire
In this cool morning
I came out to adore your glare

Don’t mock me
With your flushed smile
In the mist of summer

And don’t push me
As you did in my dream
Into the pool of heated water  
In empty-armed


Burning Desire…a red color rose.

Drauntz
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7 posted 2007-06-21 09:06 PM


You wanted to stay then I had to leave
I went into the mountain to sit by the stream

Blue sky sifted through golden weaves
Green breeze danced with silver lace

Summer colors was flower seas
Morning wind sighed soft waves  


I pretended that I was a young sapling
Waiting for hives from buzzing bees

I collected a handfull of bird’s gleam
For the little fish that wandered in team
for  the  solemn pebble who courted
his lover, his bubble in  rainbow’s theme

I jumped from shadow to shadow
A hide and seek with summer’s glee
in and out of the dream of the tree
chased  butterfly and spilled his tea

I ride back home in Sun’s beam
you still sat in sizzling scream
I opened the door and turn on the fan
For your spring promise,  leave.  



Aurelian
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since 2007-03-20
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8 posted 2007-06-21 09:39 PM


Summertime

In the revolving weeks and months there comes a time
When the sunlight is a curse, the noon a burden
When time ekes by a lone cricket chirp at a time
And water flees the uplands and hides in valleys

A walk is a battle – a struggle against heat  
Sallying from shade-port across to cool shade port
Dodging the million minions of a tyrant sun
As all of us below endure the long scalding

Drauntz
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9 posted 2007-06-22 09:08 PM


Soft velvet curtain
The magic hand of the moon
Dust off  dream of June  


[This message has been edited by Drauntz (06-23-2007 02:00 PM).]

Drauntz
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10 posted 2007-06-24 12:59 PM


Two trees,
Leaves brush leaves,
By the sea smiling a rainbow
To the setting sun  

A telescope looks at the sail
erasing the last smear of light
of faraway and Silently
handing over the crown of the night

A girl and a boy
Against the white railing
Kissing passionately
They left the summer heat
The only hope of growing fruit.


Titia Geertman
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11 posted 2007-06-25 02:34 PM


Setting up a private site here? LOL

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Drauntz
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12 posted 2007-06-25 03:43 PM


only for gossiping  about  summer heat..
Drauntz
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13 posted 2007-06-25 07:13 PM


Don't love me,
with the dreaded summer heat
leave me alone
in the shaded cool place
so I might
dream a coolish dream

Drauntz
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14 posted 2007-06-27 11:49 AM


Dream in deep blue sea
Jump out for a breath of poem
caught by summer heat



Drauntz
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15 posted 2007-06-30 07:05 PM


Don’t whine
My love,
For the winter shrine

In this hot summer
I still keep the light
With the wax of moon


Angel_without_wings
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16 posted 2007-08-04 12:45 PM


Boil some water for more heat
Remember keep the ice cubes frozen
If you mix and match the heat will
go on forever!

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