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Try to explain what this mean? cuase i cant i wanna see who can
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Fabiani Member
since 2006-05-12
Posts 123Mesa, Az 
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Good morning my sweet vision of morbid disorder And Good evening wonderful riddance and such Maybe today I'll touch the burgundy halo Trimming the tunnels and of in with tenants Spangled cross a more tangible premise ?? it needs splinters all up in day-tripper visuals Take it easy man, f!@# it I'll take it any way I can My palms are generous When I witness fury scurry past my window Model city in a bottle plugged hostile Its bliss kissin pollutin And a billion suckers pucker in a bind Maybe the sunken ship is the treasure No, but they insist it man I try to Spin me dizzy spongin Up to giving dungeons functions As opposed to art historians absorbed inside assumptions Everybody pop your knuckles when the style divorces vertical Marveling at the spite with which it curdled Outside my tenement grows a little warmth From out the mugs of masons wasted Laying bricks for days to later find they owned the lot adjacent Mark the blasphemy elements of elogance and savagery Murder the gossip, f#$% it run off happily The broken spoke cyclers chokin open doctors they as born fetus In a matchbox conveniently padlocked to the hammer base Now these impurities embedded in five illiterates textiles Shedded in the hell tale to motivate blind suspended leverage Now i'm drowning in a pool of why are you here Sabotage with my beats the burden pertainance of if I die this year My name is Dryspell My name is pillar My name's allegiance My name is flagrant My name's a thousand steps from patience But I'm sick and tired of waiting My name's Polaris My name is canvas My name is lowlife My name's intention My name is every imperfection that plays a part in my descension My name is carnival My name is posture My name is polarized My name is evidence My name is delicate approach from symettricating my fellowship My name's Possessive My name is cordial My name is Igloo My name is captivate My name is contaminate the rich And clock the profits for the captain's sake Let us hope that the horrors of evil No longer loiter on the doorstep of your past Circle of sandbags drag the shield a meal the meaty hand grabs I'm splitting hopes at your local Acropolis Opulence in a cockpit not the pocket for them born with a ?? Sunk to rest while they've exhausted the art of drunken address Exhibit fracture lines that converge towards where the hackers whine Where trappers slack the traps Unlatch the catch then cover up his trackers line That will make his majesty furious Oh bury his head and how could I have been so dense If only, yeah but I'm lonely My days graze normalcy then morbidly crash My years breathe honesty then sardonically laugh Alas, I dig my toes in to the sand and spit foliage out my lips Personifying mankind's end all aspirations Hope floats... No, hope sinks like broken boats and most harassed before provoked I'm tossing darts at a map of the arts to pick up where you choked And when the last leaf falls off the branches of resonance I'll be waiting with my butterfly net to collect the evidence Well I am a room with poison oak scaling the sides Arachnids on the celing, rugged thumb tacks, bones and rusty pipes If you can squeeze between the bars Enjoy my space employ my waste In case the hand dealt by a stolen grace Do you ever wish the circle wasn't square So when landsharks start circling the borders You could just cut them off at the corners There's a ghost in the basket of values Pertinent to, which cayak pilot succeeded in serving him proof Now I'm surfin it through So if you need me spread your wings to spell my name Above the mess near the other funny requests See bow to tolerant mannerisms of higher to win To assist in a meticulous pick a part of cobweb skins Of innocence A child of timid instinct with that ten step ahead premise Supply dust bowls before the zephyr was requested Violent humble shoes ten shades of blues come off the difference I grimace, took me one hours blink to conclude that sickly innocence My name is Dryspell My name is pillar My name's allegiance My name is flagrant My name's a thousand steps from patience But i'm sick and tired of waitin My name's Polaris My name is canvas My name is lowlife My name's intention My name is every imperfection that plays a part in my descension My name is carnival My name is posture My name is polarized My name is evidence My name is delicate approach from symettricating my fellowship My name's Possessive My name is cordial My name is Igloo My name is captivate My name is contaminate the rich And clock the profits for the captain's sake My name is vagabond My name is angel My name is century My name is hunter My name is sunburst My name is wildfire My name is scrutinize My name is basic My name is consequence My name is cigarettes My name is cynical My name is tolerance My name is hallucinogen My name is waterfall My name is runaway My name is alarm clock My name is... |
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Dreamink Junior Member
since 2006-06-05
Posts 15Green Mountain State of Mind |
I think it means somebody's been hitting the crack pipe just a little too hard lately....but then, what do I know. I like it. I have no real conception of what it is I like about it, but I do like it. As for meaning, I'd say it's meaning would be entirely subjective to the reader. Thanks for sharing an intriguing poem to mull over, anyway! |
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Dreamink Junior Member
since 2006-06-05
Posts 15Green Mountain State of Mind |
By the by, who wrote this? |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
http://seeklyrics.com/lyrics/Aesop-Rock/Dryspell.html Perhaps the original author of these lyrics knows what he/she was trying to convey? |
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Fabiani Member
since 2006-05-12
Posts 123Mesa, Az |
I think both of these replies have beat around the bush |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
The lyric is ambiguous, if not non-nonsensical. Many punk bands used anything to create confusion and chaos in their performances. The lyric means nothing by it's structure, but it means everything in the performance that includes it. Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Go with the 'Stink-Man' Fabiani. He may be odoriferous, but he's right. I echo his reply. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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