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I Am response |
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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 248
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"I AM" I am lost in the world, crying out for love I wonder where I will be in the end I hear the screeches of a thousand broken hearts I see the tears of a million dying souls I want to know when I lost control I am lost in the world, crying out for love I pretend that everything is really alright I feel the stabs of a million knives I touch the face of a man who isn't really there I worry that I'll be stuck here forever I cry on the shoulder of friends that I no longer see I am lost in the world, crying out for love I understand the screams that you hear in the night I say all the things you that you wish were right I dream of the day ill meet you again I try to uphold the image I've made I hope that someday, you might know the truth I am lost in the world, crying out for love. <3 yeahhhhh i know, it bites, but whatever<3 <3kerR I might have messy hair, runny makeup and a tear-steaked face, but at least I know I have loved. |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
This thing just will not die!!!! lol You have done an absolutely superb job of this. I am seriously in awe. I hope that someday, you might know the truth I am lost in the world, crying out for love. These lines tell more than most (including me) could in a full write. When all is said |
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HAZMATTO Junior Member
since 2005-11-24
Posts 14 |
VERY GOOD READ. LOSING YOUR SELF IS EASY BUT FINDING YOURSELF IS SO MUCH MORE ENLIGHTENING. I THINK YOU HAVE FOUND YOURSELF. GOOD JOB. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Excellent rise to this challenge. Sends a message that life's journey is never easy and I enjoyed the walk with you. To see real beauty you must look with your heart. |
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