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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough 
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Just trying to keep the fire going... someone give us a challenge ... and jumpstart my muse puleeeeeez Tima |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
How about a piece, any form or format, which does not use the verb 'be' in any tense or form. This includes the 'helper' aspect. Have fun!  |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
You mean as in BEcause BEhind BEfore? HeHe And, will get on this 'un right away |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Noooo...just BE. As in: am, are, is, was, were, be, been. Merely one of the most prominant verbs out there. Could have been worse. Challenge could have been 'no articles' (a, an, the, and similar items).  |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Worry Lines ******** noticable lines of worry have taken residence on my brow just scars to remind my heart in case I forget somehow dark circles tell the story of no sleep, and worried nights shaky hands holding the pen yet faithfully I write the muse inside this soul has withered and gone astray just another story that I can't share today maybe some other time when the clouds aren't so near I will share the story of exactly why I'm here Choose to live, and love and all the in betweens. Dry your eyes, and shelter your heart and let the pendulum swing. |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Very good attempt, and I'm gonna go anal here since I can. *insert persneckity aura here* All was good until the end, when aren't (contraction of are and not) and I'm (contraction of I and am) were used. *cackles and falls over in fits if evil glee* |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Well shoot.... I shall try again |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awesome...I won't do it...LOL but that was cool...  |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Tima, Just for you, I got around to doing something I have been wanting to do for ages. I posted it here, in the poetry workshop (because it fits a bit more there than here): /pip/Forum22/HTML/000860.html Hope to see you giving it a go! "God becomes as we are that we may be as he is." ~William Blake |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
/pip/Forum55/HTML/000852.html |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
try free verse? ''In the streets of ecstasy the visions run,'' In the autumn of silence'' I keep a fragrance bottle my |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
heres a challenge,,don't log on your pc for a week, 7 days,,,,,no business weeks , and go out in the world,,,that'll rattle the muse. If home is where the heart is,,,,,I guess the corner bar is where the mind wanders off to |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
http://www.webcom.com/wordings/artofwrite/poetrygenerator.html Here you go, little one. This will get your muse to smiling... |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Thanks everyone... Michelle... well, I work on my PC I operate a web design business and a few sites of my own. So, to not log on, would be to abandon what I have put my heart into for nearly 4 years. Great advice tho... and trust me... being home with 4 kids all the time is as real as it gets. Sunshine... thanks a bunch, have been there before and forgot about it Off to play |
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