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Cinderelly
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since 2001-12-31
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0 posted 2004-08-14 01:22 AM


I thought of these few lines but now I'm stuck . . . What can you do with them?

"but in my so called fairytale,
I wait for the glass slipper to drop."



* For all the words of tongue and pen, the saddest are those, "It might have been." *

[This message has been edited by Cinderelly (08-16-2004 08:07 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-08-16 11:44 AM


Create a poem?  
Cinderelly
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since 2001-12-31
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2 posted 2004-08-16 08:06 PM


I wanted to see what poems others could write with them . . .

* For all the words of tongue and pen, the saddest are those, "It might have been." *

eor
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since 2002-09-26
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3 posted 2004-08-20 05:22 PM


but in my so called fairytale,
I wait for the glass slipper to drop

A declarable fly I'm tiny to us

Margot
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since 2003-10-04
Posts 154

4 posted 2004-08-31 03:58 AM


Poetic Lives

But in my so called fairytale
I wait for the glass slipper to drop
In slow motion I watch it slide
Crashing to the two-stepped dance floor
Shattering my life
Into a million pieces
Picking each up
I find corner of my soul
Words of my heart
Memories of my blessings
I find my real home

Margot Hill
31Aug04

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2004-08-31 02:20 PM


lovely,  Margo
*s
M

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