A follow up on my original challenge

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Poetry Challenge!

A follow up on my original challenge

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

0 posted 2003-04-04 09:32 PM

remeber the 'don't waste a word' challenge? I have constructed a follow up of it

ten lines
choose tree words that must be repeated every line
But other than the 3 repeated words, you cannot repeat any others. however, you can use the words in a different for (blow, blew as an example)

example:

the wind blew,
wind blowing the fear away,
Wind song, blows the sadness away,
A moth caught in the blowing winds,
fell to the ground, tears streaked the blowing wind......

Wow, thats hard...

(haha, try this one!)

Never be normal!

[This message has been edited by Wind (04-04-2003 09:41 PM).]

Masked Intruder

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since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

1 posted 2003-04-07 12:33 PM

I don't think I know enough tree words for this one.

Riley

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since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

2 posted 2003-04-10 10:23 PM

let me give this one a try

my word will be fall

leaves fall like tears
from a tree such as falling from heaven
here has a love fallen on a branch
exceding from the falling love birds
that crash through the branches as they fall
for what seems like eternity they fall
banging their heads each time a leaf falls
its like a love that fell into your life
burning them selfs on the falling acid rain
this is what its like falling in love

probably didn't do it right, o well gave it a try

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