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Poetry Challenge!

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Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

0 posted 2002-10-06 11:38 AM

I'm curious as to what you all can come up with in the way of a four-liner piece.

BUT...............the catch is that you can only use words that contain four letters or less.

Can you dig it!!??

[This message has been edited by Krishankins (10-06-2002 11:39 AM).]

Crazy Eddie
Member

since 2002-09-14

Posts 178

1 posted 2002-10-06 07:35 PM

When down and out the rub of silk once lost
can cut the skin and flay a mind.
In turn the play of pain upon the wise and rich
may be to love and live yet fail to miss.

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

2 posted 2002-10-06 09:48 PM

VERY impressive, Crazy Eddie!!

Now THAT'S what it's all about! Very nicely done!!
Have you posted it in one of the forums? I looked in open, but didn't see it. You should post it!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

[This message has been edited by Krishankins (10-06-2002 09:50 PM).]

quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

3 posted 2002-11-20 11:06 PM

you beat my own word
into the dark of the
rust in my mind.

when will you end this mad plea?

/jen/

i'm so bitterly disappointed. betty, i think it's time you leave now.

[This message has been edited by quietlydying (11-20-2002 11:08 PM).]

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