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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
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Do me a favor, won't you? Use the title of this challenge somewhere within a poem of your own design, weight, texture, hair color and eye shade -- in other words, just use the damn thing somewhere, nixing all the superfluous stuff I said following. Um ... is this Dark? Or Open? Eh, whichever you feel. I'll see you with mine, soon. Mike |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yer on my cloud again, Mike... This is getting bizarre...I've been working on a pencil drawing of something similar..now? I have SOMETHING ELSE to think about...will ponder this as I clean house this afternoon and see what comes of it!  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) the man has written..... bravo! [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (09-06-2002 12:51 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh my...Mikie? Did you SEE that?  damn Ron...I insist you move this to OPEN where everyone can enjoy it! and now? I only thought I had a challenge ahead o me...sigh...I can't get that outta my head...and why o why would I WANT to? |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I did so enjoy... [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (09-06-2002 12:52 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
OK...I think I've beaten this one to death and not added any new perspective to the phrase nor been very clever inusing it to say more than the obvious..so I'll quit now... but thanks for the challenge! It was a nice diversion..... and YOU lady.... demanding???? (chuckling) I'm terribly stubborn when people get demanding...... [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (09-06-2002 12:52 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Okay, now you're just showing off.Loved these, Ron. (I'll work on mine soon) And yes, Sen, we do think alike sometimes, don't we?  Mikey |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Nah...at least not intending to be a show off.... just obsessive when I see multiple ways to use a phrase or an idea... generally why I don't do challenges... because I can't choose one version to write, I have to write several and usually end up beating the idea to death in my head. I am sure you and Ser will come up some unique play of word and image that do the potential held in the phrase justice.... made me want to speak some African dialect when I read it...and do a piece filled with sounds... maybe one of you two can. Later all... must get my head back into the program requirements and a database for now... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"a nice diversion" he says! I'll give ya nice diversion! These are marvelous---but? now what can I write about? *pout* and...chuckling...oh my, I see something in Open now...oh I DO love having my way with you!  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
He does have a way.... ahem... Mikey, you can be assured I will work on this tonight.... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Great, Sunshine! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Posted. This was a great one, Mikey...my muse was just waiting... Thank you! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
me too... in the open... hope it is worth your time... regards, sudhir |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mike, this was a great challenge. I enjoyed my participation. Thanks! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I'm glad you found something in it for you, Sunshine. I loved the poem that resulted. In fact, I loved *all* the poems that resulted from this. Mikey |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Mikey, I can only say thank you for the challenge! My muse definatley needed the work out and it took alot of deep thought to come up with an idea. Thank you! If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks for providing such a great poem to go with the challenge, Gentle Spirit. Mikey |
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