Poetry Challenge! |
A not so dark thing |
wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I suggested that one of our fellow poets (not a fellow, I'm sure) was seemingly able to "polish water". A squirrel fellow, of a certain poetic nature, motioned that the phrase be used in a challenge. This motion was seconded by DeaDi Amore (said water polisher). So...Here it is. Use the phrase "polish water" in a poem longer than 5 words and not to exceed 50,000 words. ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Rats! I had one all ready but it was 50,001 words long..sigh..ok...I'll try and edit it! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Can't wait to try this one, wranx! Said if I only could ... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Done, and in Open. (too light for Dark ) It's called "I wanna walk the moon with you" -- meaning Lori, sorry wranx. Great challenge! Said if I only could ... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Sorry?? ~wranx |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
While in Poland I was getting hotter, So I took a drink, Of "Polish" water?....LOL...howz dat? |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
If nothing else, you kept wranx's challenge alive. I think more people would've done it if the title didn't include the word dark in it, wranx. Many people are afraid of the Dark forum ... I've even read some saying they would get rid of it if it was in their power. :[ Mikey "I fall into your arms." [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (08-06-2002 06:05 PM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Get out of town squirrel?? Are you kidding me??? Have they read any of the posts there??? There is some extrordinary work in that forum!!! Good work! Worthy work! STELLAR WORK!! It's just not HAPPY work! I think I shall go write something about how my pony flew to the end of some sparkly rainbow thing and found butterfly puppies playing angel tag with magic hummingbirds. Oh! I just did...Damn! ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Nah, some people won't give it a chance, but that's all right. I can appreciate that Dark isn't to everyone's liking. And I like hummingbird tag. (or whatever it is) Mikey "Oh you've got green eyes. Oh you've got blue eyes. Oh you've got grey eyes." -New Order |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I think we should just make a "darkadult" forum...and be done with it!!! (since we are FOREVER recruiting for these two) and wranx...I'm thinking on it...need daughter's permission of time to perform~~of course...~sigh~ Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... [This message has been edited by devina (08-08-2002 10:33 PM).] |
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