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Unfinished Write - Anyone? Anyone?
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
Walking in the rain, Catching falling snow, Picking wild flowers & Learning to let go... Anyone? Anyone? These lines have been in my head for months!! |
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IKNAP Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 47Torrington, Connecticut |
hay i tried its not very good but tell me what you think: Walking in the rain, Catching falling snow, Picking wild flowers & Learning to let go my minde is clear from you you no longer care you were the scattered few who were never there |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
I feel a colaboration comming on... The strands in your eyes |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Walking in the rain, Catching falling snow, Picking wild flowers & Learning to let go Petals melting on my tongue exploding stars of galaxy-- I am drinking wildflowers walking down a hot tar street...  ?and an oops corrected! [This message has been edited by serenity (05-19-2002 06:27 AM).] |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
Ah, what imagery Serinity! I LoVe It! ~Rayne The strands in your eyes |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Oh yes, Serenity is Goddess. But .... my stab: Walking in the rain, Catching falling snow, Picking wild flowers & Learning to let go... Losing all your scent. Your face in slow rewind. I need to know yr went. What I lost I need to find. Hmm ... Serenity wins. She said burn ... together. |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
What I left I need to find...Dont we all! Well spoken...MoRe MoRe The strands in your eyes |
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CowgirlFreedom17 Member
since 2002-05-20
Posts 82Mississippi |
Ok~ lemme try. Whispers in the night Clouds forming in the day Eagles taking flight & Daydreaming in rain Don't hold back the words you really mean. |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
"Daydreaming in Rain" sounds musical...WoNdErFuL The strands in your eyes |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
Walking in the rain Catching falling snow Picking wildflowers and learning to let go Talking through the pain The meadow breezes blow Wading through the river and trying not to slow Lightning threads the canopy and glows in my cloudy eyes falling leaves encircle me Breathe in the forest's life Walking in the rain Catching falling snow Smiling at the flowers Breathe out; let it go... "The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite." [This message has been edited by MidnightSon (06-06-2002 08:07 PM).] |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Just experimental.... Walking in the rain, Catching falling snow, Picking wild flowers & Learning to let go... Letting go of pain To stop the dreading cold Piecing the stray petals & Forming hearts a-whole _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Kneeling in the rain Beaten by my foe Blood drips on flowers Now comes the final blow. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Opeth that sounds sooo good!!! my turn.... The wind attacks my face Forbidding me to go further Blood-soaked flowers fill the place Evidence of love's murder |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
MSR, you have un-blocked my writer's block I was experiencing...thank you..let's write ..are u up for a duet?? I got so many thoughts in my head now from your one paragraph and mine |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Walking in the rain, Catching falling snow, Picking wild flowers & Learning to let go... Silver lines the clouds That gently slip away Breezes whisper love notes To trees that softly sway. Though the fallen leaves Have turned a shade of gold The dreams of song and honey bees Are ones to cherish, hold. ===== I tried. ^^ It was fun though! Good luck with the rest of it! -Leah |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
"...Walking in the rain Catching falling snow Smiling at the flowers Breathe out; let it go..." MidnightSon, you have given me what I crave...closure; Thank you... Chasing Rain, gold indeed my friend! Opeth you have given me a challenge in your verse...May I?!? RosePetal, a duet? Oh Im up for it! ~Rayne For in much wisdom is much grief & he who increases knowledge increases sorrow... Eccl. 1:18 [This message has been edited by MIdsummerRain (06-08-2002 07:26 PM).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well here's my two cents...I wrote TO it rather than AWAY from it... Standing on the porch, tears in both our eyes, we both knew it was coming to this, now we were saying goodbye. Stepping off the porch, afraid to look back, I felt it all at once, and the tears began to fall. Walking in the rain, Catching falling snow, Picking wild flowers & Learning to let go... L e a r n i n g to let go.... |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
What a bittersweet twist! I loved it; you have such a unique way of putting things! ~Rayne For in much wisdom is much grief |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
In the spring of your life, A hint of rain to fall. Winter sneaking in, No one heard the call. Now you've slipped away, Rain has begun to flow. My heart grew cold so fast, I think it's turned to snow. Walking in the rain, Catching falling snow, Picking wild flowers & Learning to let go...  Bye Ginger Michelle... [This message has been edited by Larry C (06-12-2002 02:07 AM).] |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
ah, Larry, You called the rain all over again... we will never forget Ginger Michelle. This particle was meant for your pen. and i know it is so hard to let go, and memories won't be enough for a long time. My heart still cries for you. {{{healing Hugs}}} Love, Sherry Sorry Rayne, just had to say something to Larry... I have no offering for this stanza... all tapped out. [This message has been edited by Magicmystery (06-12-2002 02:56 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Thanks to Rayne for the opportunity and to Sherry for the understanding. It always helps. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Dear SummerRain. I just found this and it looked like fun. Don't know where you are. When it rains it snows? And with flowers to pick? A place anything goes. |
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