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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-03-10 09:30 PM


The challenge should you choose to accept it is to write a poem containing the phrase Communication Breakdown Any style any length, and Communication Breakdown doesn’t even have to be consecutive. Okay let’s see those poems. This is because of a conversation I had with Keth, so if it’s too hard blame her I will


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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1 posted 2002-03-11 07:57 AM


hmm...i might just try this one!!! thanks for the challenge

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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2 posted 2002-03-12 05:03 PM


screaming
yelling
panting
crying
this is our communication

hatred
sadness
bitter
dying
insults thrown, no vindication

breakdown
anger
violence
fleeing
continuing our immunisation

immune to pain
unfeeling in chaos
communication breakdown brings
a sudden slience that hurts the ears
and now we die.


hmm... I changed my mind. I think I better not write in the little white box anymore. I think everything turns out much better on paper. I'll get back to you.

Thanks for the challenge, I'll see if I remember to do something a little better...

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3 posted 2002-03-13 02:23 PM


Challenge accepted and posted

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4 posted 2002-03-14 03:19 PM


I took your challange
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