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Poetry Challenge!

Hollow Friends

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-08-13 02:15 PM

its beating on my mind again,
where is the hollow friend,
i want that craving,
makes me feel small,
thrown around someones rag doll,
but im in heaven,
hell's release,
no more chains,no more leash,
i can breathe,and im alive,
nothing kicking me inside,
the power of love,
has found me dead

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pandora
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 184

1 posted 1999-08-13 09:56 PM

hijack--- heheh---- this is a really cool poem and it says alot and it's written really well... could you go post it in Open Poetry forum for others to read??? Pretty please?

-pandora-

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