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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-01-04 09:05 PM


Okay my Friends and family I give you this phrase and I wonder how many of you can put it in a poem

Until the stars grow dark and there is no more day
When the air catches fire and the seas dry to dust


you can use the lines in any order, but you cannot change the order of the words.

So for example you could have:

Until the stars grow dark and there is no more day
.............................................

When the air catches fire and the seas dry to dust
..............................................
Fill in the blanks
I'm sure yours will all be utterly fabulous

Okay enjoy...........
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy
     
  


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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Dusk Treader
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1 posted 2002-01-05 12:22 PM


Well, I just posted my response to your poem in Open #18, I hope you enjoy it. Dark, with a lighter ending. Balance is the key, LOL. Loved the challenge!

"A hard, cold wisom is required for goodness to accomplish good. Goodness without wisdom always accomplishes evil" - Robert Heinlein

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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2 posted 2002-01-05 02:04 PM


this is a lovely challenge, I believe I am up for it!

Kathleen--
Neither genius, fame, nor love show the greatness of the soul.
Only kindness can do that. ~Jean Baptiste Henri Lacordaire~

Titia Geertman
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3 posted 2002-01-06 05:03 PM


Hey sweet Mushy, I'm in, just love challenges

Titia

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