Poetry Challenge! |
Anti-Cliche Challenge |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Okay kids. . .it's time to put your pens to paper and your money where your mouth is. . . I want whoever takes this challenge to use the following phrase in an Uncliche-like way. . . and yes, the phrase may seem cliche. . . but, since we're working on not being too cliche, I know that you'll figure something out. . . The phrase is (and you have to use it exactly as I have it here. . . and it doesn't have to be at the beginning or the end, it can be anywhere in the poem): quote: Good luck!!!! Post your responses to this challenge in Open!!! ------------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
hmmm should be easy as pie,,, I'm sure I'll take to it like a duck to water,,, piece of cake,,, no problemo... of course if you dont see anything from me it means that this was harder than archie bunkers head and I gave up....lol There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sven, This looks like a good one, my muse has been on vacation for a while but maybe this will help bring it home, Love, Cerenity |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
Let the brilliant stars turn on Me so you can see my eyes Be on you searching for Your smile as you admire the Shelter I built for us From the money I won at The casino in Biloxi where a Storm was so bad even The electricity went out Light a match Whithin minutes Your hands Dark and soft Touch my flank [This message has been edited by monique (edited 05-15-2001).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
As this is a quick one, just flexing my poetic muscle I shall post it here ---------------------------------- Let me be your shelter from the storm The light within your dark. . . When your heart is failing you can tremble on mine, we shared that first breath and we shall share the last. Now there is talk that I am draining you in the throws of death, they may come scalpel bared but nothing will separate us my Siamese sister. "across the unfair divide |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Let me be your shelter form a storm, The light within your dark, Let the cosmic worlds, Guide me through tough planets, To the sun of your heart. Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
AD good grief this looks quite hard I'll give it a whirl, I'm not saying I'll do it but I can try and see what happens, and may you have mercy on me if this turns out as hard as I think it will be. Take care love as always Bubbles Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, I think this will be a taxing on my ingenuity as the unbump facility, but I may give it a go if I can get my wretched muse to kickstart me. Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i tried /pip/Forum48/HTML/001492.html thank you for the opportunity to get some feelings off my chest..much appreciated |
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