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gidget7
Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 52
Arkansas, USA

0 posted 2000-12-06 12:11 PM


O.K. I know I have been in and out of here alot here in the past few months, But I have a request that I would ask as many of you as can, to fill for me.Here it is.
  Can you write a short or long poem about yourself ? What do you like about yourself, and what do you not like about yourself. Physical features, emotional,dreams and hopes, filled and unfullfulled. Things of that nature.And be honest,if you really feel you have beautiful eyes, then say so, this is not a vanity check or anything, I would just like to know how you feel about yourself, and the things around you.

© Copyright 2000 Kimberley Clayton - All Rights Reserved
fractal007
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958

1 posted 2000-12-06 04:49 PM


Fractal007 - Reflection of the Self


Gentle
Yet often hurtful of others.

Intelligent
Yet often forgetting to think before I speak.

Eyes
That often forget to take in all there is to see.

Christian
Yet often lacking in faith and trust.

Loved, protected, and cherished by God
Christian

Piercing green that stare into the deep recesses of the mind
Eyes

Fighting the challenges of philosophy and creativity
Intelligent

Caring and loving toward others
Gentle

raleighbttrfly
Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160
Raleigh NC
2 posted 2000-12-07 09:11 PM


Beautiful eyes lovely smile
That’s what some would say
But me, I jest can’t see it that way
Curves galore but what are they for
If no one sees my hart
Judged on face value that’s so shallow
In me there is so much more
Some can’t see past my chest
And this I must confess offends me
My hart is warm
My head is strong
And I can forgive almost any wroung
These things my have no form
But to me they mean so much more

Not sure this a grate pome but I tryed Gidet7,let me know what you think.


gidget7
Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 52
Arkansas, USA
3 posted 2000-12-08 12:24 PM


Yes, they are both great, I suppose I should take myself up on my own challenge.Would only be fair huh??
I am happy that you both took the time to post on this challenge, not only does it help each of us here on the site to identify with one another, my hopes were also to help each of us identify with ourselves, I am sure each of us can find beauty in ourselves, as well as a not so good side, I must work on mine now, and again, thank you both.

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