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Mystic Junior Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 13 |
Ok, here's the problem. I'm trying to write a song on my guitar. I love poetry, so I want to make a song out of one. Here's what I have so far: Chances are I'm dreaming, but I've got nothing to lose. There's no doubt I love you, but it's too hard to choose. A life of fame and fortune, or a life with you. In time, I hope I'll know what's right, if my heart stays true. So will you love me? Or am I just another girl. Do you really care for me? Or are we in 2 different worlds. There's so much more out there, instead of this longshot love. But can I really walk away, from the one I'm dreaming of? --------------------------------------------- O.k. that's all. A little help? Please?! ------------------ Sunshine |
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Mystic Junior Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 13 |
Help!!!  |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
Song writing? If I’m as bad at this as I am at poetry we’ve got serious problems but here goes nothing Chance is that I’m dreaming But I've got nothing left to lose I guess I know I love you But you’re making it hard to choose This life of fame and fortune Is a life without you In time I will believe What my heart believes could make these feelings true Will you really love me Will you take me to your heart will you really love me or will you tear my world apart I’ve got to know the answers to questions in my mind do you really love me or is it just a waste of time Am I just another girl And do you really care for me Are we in 2 different worlds Or is there more to this you see Is this such a long shot Can I really walk away Or will you take a chance With this one romance I need to hear you say Will you really love me Will you take me to your heart Will you really love me Or will you tear my world apart I’ve got to know the answers To questions in my mind Do you really love me Or is it just a waste of time .....and so on |
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Mystic Junior Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 13 |
Yay! Someone finally answered! Good idea! I like it. Thanks bunches Craig.  P.S. I really like your poetry! |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
Liking my poetry says very little about your taste ( if you don't tell anybody I won't ) I was glad to assist |
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Cobra Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 58 |
Well! The nerve! I do so have taste. Good enough taste to read your lovely grrr.. ugly writing! Nyah! Nyah! P.S. I won't tell... |
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Mystic Junior Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 13 |
Ooops! I unraveled my other identity! I am Cobra! Shhh! Don't tell... Ok. It's my sister's username,but don't tell her I know her password. |
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