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Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2000-11-01 11:57 PM

Here's my challenge, if you dare to take it!
Can be a poem, any kind you make it.

Write some verses (post anywhere you choose)
about what it would be like in someone else's shoes...

not just anyone though, not your brother or your ex
but someone of the opposite sex

So..go forth and rhyme!!!

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

1 posted 2000-11-02 12:24 PM

hey-- you said any form we choose--- so it doesn't have to rhyme...

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2000-11-02 07:50 AM

From the opposite sex, hey! Sounds interesting, very interesting. I'll give it a go just give a little time.
Kethry

Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

monique
Member

since 2000-02-03

Posts 369
Louisiana

3 posted 2000-11-02 09:24 AM

If i be someone of the opposite sex
I would fall in love with me next
It would be heaven on earth
There would be no more hurt

jytree
Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

4 posted 2000-11-03 09:25 AM

To be one of the oppsite sex,
Would get me thinking what is next,
Hide in the shadows out of fear,
Just to know that he draws near,
So now I am a woman for christ,
Running for my sweat dear life,
Because lise is special to me,
Right after I was set free,
It is weird to walk upon the light,
Only to expect the next short fight,
For when the time comes and I'm levan,
That is when God come for me to take me into heaven.

Well there it is I hope you liked it I am not quite sure if it was your were looking for but it is cool.

Love is pure in it's top form,
But with out romance love is not born

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2000-11-03 09:02 PM

PdV, I did not attempt this in a poem, but instead, in Prose....so visit here

/pip/Forum15/HTML/000955.html

if you are interested...< !signature-->

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-03-2000).]

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

6 posted 2000-11-04 12:13 PM

OK I decided to write something new for this
I posted it in pub corner:
/pip/Forum27/HTML/002552.html

"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

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