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Poetry Challenge!

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a_little_girl
Member

since 2000-05-08

Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

0 posted 2000-10-26 06:52 PM

I need help with this poem...can you direct it towards its end?
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The stormy weather matches my mood,
at the computer, my time to brood.
Over thoughts and such,
and not else much.

Nothing seems to flow from me,
at least nothing that you can't see.
Nothing is what this poem'll be,
that is if you'll help direct me.
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Well, direct this poem. I hope this'll be an inspired poem.
--Little Girl

[This message has been edited by a_little_girl (edited 10-26-2000).]

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

1 posted 2000-10-26 08:04 PM

Create a twist, a bend of mind,
Before too long a poem you'll find,
A word of mind, a slip of the tongue,
Catch the thought, while it's still young.
Write it down, quick, with haste,
That moment's thought you must not waste,
Catch it now before it's gone,
There you see, our poem is done!

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 2000-10-26 09:06 PM

Bravo Ron!! You whizz around passions don't you!!

Isis

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

3 posted 2000-10-26 10:22 PM

yes, i do. having a ball! Who needs Disney World!

a_little_girl
Member

since 2000-05-08

Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

4 posted 2000-10-26 11:10 PM

Thank you Ron. I did post a poem @ the Corner Pub...but since then, nothing came. Thank you for the inspiration.
--Little Girl

monique
Member

since 2000-02-03

Posts 369
Louisiana

5 posted 2000-10-27 08:43 PM

all I can twist is my body
my words can't dance
I am just lost in a bloody
battle against ignorance

the mosquitoes are biting my leg
so i can scratch myself
into an elevated shaft
where i should lay on my raft

narrow is my mind
forcing it to expand
without succes
i crawl in my bed

wishing for love
to come along
i go crazy
calling on god

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