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miranca
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since 2000-09-12
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0 posted 2000-09-12 09:47 PM


I am looking for help! I am expecting a child in November and as i did with my last two childeren i make my own birth announcements but i want to make this one extra specail since this child will be completing our family.i have been trying to work on something for weeks but just can't seem to pull it of nothing seems to sound right so i decided to leave it to someone elses hands so if your are intresseted in helping me out with a poem for my child please feel free to give it a go .what i am looking for is something that has to do with the day of arrival "the first day" i aprecate it very much and i am looking forward to hearing from you
                Miranca


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Nan
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1 posted 2000-09-12 09:59 PM


Because this is not a poetic post, and this forum is exclusively for poetry - I'm moving this thread to the Poetry Challenge forum and hoping our talented poets will respond to your request...
SorrowsMystress
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2 posted 2000-09-13 12:53 PM


Miranca- first off, let me start by saying CONGRATS on the new addition! I'm due with my first in December...  I have just begun working on this challenge, and hope to have it up within the next few days. It will be posted in the Open poetry #9 when it's completed (I'll let you know when I'm done so you can take a look)... and I just would like to say that I wish you much happieness with your baby.

"It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath


Sunshine
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3 posted 2000-09-13 09:23 PM


Miranca, let me know what you think...

On the first day of our babe's birth
when s[he] first felt the breath of earth
already a completion of love and heart
our third child's come, to take her/his part
a fulfillment of family, a work of art.


needs to be edited accordingly...

God Bless to you and yours...


Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


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