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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief 
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An apparition < !signature-->so perfect in it flawless design. Chimera, deception it's all mine. Dreams, those delusions of what was never so perfect in life. Dreams, those fancy fallacies that span all the world and seven seas. In un-enchanted nighttime slumbers I had no lovely, peaceful fantasies, just more ambiguous hallucinations, brought on by invisible temptations. I have seen visions and inviting mirages secretly inhabited by ghost and ghouls and an assortment of other forgotten phantoms. But her. she has not left me, a memory, a living specter. Her spirit lost in the uncertain labyrinth of illusion, and random memory. A little pixie dust will make it right, that’s all that is needed on this sleepless night. After all, what is reality anyway? Nothin' but a collective hunch. [This message has been edited by Effigy (edited 07-20-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Effigy, I like it, I Like It!!! Good stuff! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
I want to ad Heavy Stuff! I like it too! monique |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Effigy, wonderful poem. magical stuff excellent images why must we pray screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, I had to take another look...this still likes me a whole lot... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
A revised version is on the main page under the name "The Tricks of Memory" After all, what is reality anyway? Nothin' but a collective hunch. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 Said if I only could ... |
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